| From The Big Field Trip – Vietnam, March 2010 |
The rain makes pddddd sound as it sploshes against the window of the taxi
Schhhhhhhhh goes a bike on the wet road
A white stone dragon creeps on the roof of a pagoda
Water drips from its beard
The Perfume River fills up with muddy water
That streams from the hillside
Looking through the foggy window
I see a lonely watermelon sitting on a board
Raindrops bead on its green veined surface
I wrap my jacket tightly around me
It’s a rainy day in Hue
| From The Big Field Trip – Vietnam, March 2010 |
Chairs creak as the audience settles themselves in the chairs
The performance starts with plucking strings
Doing! Doin! Doi!
A ripple of water spreads as a puppet comes from behind a very thin piece of cloth
The hidden puppeteers move the puppets with rods that are under water
Four dragons swirl figure eights while spitting water out of their mouths
The water sloshes and jumps
The drum beats loudly
Grandpa slumps against my shoulder
He’s tired because he hasn’t slept for days
The dark theater surrounds us
We are at a water puppet show
| From The Big Field Trip – Vietnam, March 2010 |
Up the stairs we go – into the moss-covered jungle
Don’t step off the path! There are land mines out there from the Vietnamese-American War
Grandpa spots a tiny white gecko on a big green leaf
I spot red-headed lizard on the slippery steps
We walk down the path to a river
Mom throws my ball into the waterfall
I jump off the slippery rocks into the crystal clear water
The deep pool is 12 feet deep – Papa can’t even touch the bottom!
Little sucker fishes clean the pool
The air is sweltering as we trudge up the back up the stairs
Cruz spots a small grey and white moth blended into tree bark
An earthworm falls from the tree tops on to a bed of leaves, right in front of Grandpa
The earthworms in this jungle are supposed to cure malaria
Calling for mates, cicadas whine like fire trucks
I hear the honking of the car horn – our driver is telling us to hurry up
We are in Bach Ma National Park
| From The Big Field Trip – Vietnam, March 2010 |
I am sea-sick, tottering on our floating junk
As the anchor lifts, the junk sways in the wind
We curve around the islands, and it reminds me of the floating mountains in Avatar
Rocks balance on the side of cliffs and they look like they’re going to fall off any second
The drizzling rain makes me shiver
Cy jumps off the junk into the icy-cold water
Fisherman bring up traps full of fish and crabs
A dried-out jellyfish lies on the sand like a plastic grocery bag
As we climb to the cave, I begin to count steps
The top of the cave looks like sand dunes in the Sahara Desert
The cave lights blink as I count 777 steps
Back in the light, we can see the islands sticking out of the green painted sea
We are in Ha Long Bay
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Very vivid, Bella. Great use of sensory details!
Dear Bella,
I am so glad to finally be writing to you. It has been far too long! I really enjoyed your poem about Viet Nam. The image of the white stone dragon with water dripping from its beard creeping along the pagoda roof is one that I can see in my mind’s eye. I also enjoyed your comparison of the jellyfish to an plastic grocery bag.
Your writing is wonderful!
Love,
Miss Gallagher
Excellent job Bella. Really like the descriptive poetry and love the pictures.
Bella, that’s a great poem and full of lots of facts too. You use your imagination well. See you soon! Love you!